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Post by Silverstream on Jun 5, 2007 11:37:03 GMT -5
Furcadia Name: Dawnstar sprinclan
IC Name: Silverstar
Clan You Wish To Join: Clan of the waters
Rank Wanted: Leader
RP Example: Silverstar padded over to her deputy, Lionclaw (Made up as nobody filled spot...), "I need you to organise one extra patrol each day. Iceheart (Made up as well) reported some rogue scents down by the sandy hill, please make sure any traces of territory is gone and that scent markers are renewed regularly, our warriors have to spend enough time hunting in this pour leafbare," with that she nodded and entered the nursery to check on the kits...
Description: A snow white she-cat with warm amber eyes and black paws, tail and ear tips. Would love a mate.
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Post by Spottedstar on Jun 5, 2007 11:43:43 GMT -5
DENIED
by Azuel, Deputy of Air Clan.
Sorry, you have a few grammar problems there and sometimes it's better to act out the emotions and actions of your character instead of having her talk through the whole post; it doesn't help with making it exciting. Also, Clan of the Waters is led by Saberstar so when she returns; hopefully, she was help you further. But for now I declare you a warrior. |
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Post by Silverstream on Jun 5, 2007 11:43:44 GMT -5
Silverstar stared into the eyes of the cougar, she saw no anger and let her neck fur lie flat. Still wary she meowed calmly, "What is your purpose here?"
"I come in peace, my group have exiled me and chased me into this forest. Pray, do you have any food to spare?"
"I'm sorry, but in the middle of leafbare you'll find no food available, but I welcome you to hunt 2 pieces of prey with an escort in our territory, and I may be able to offer a nest for the night, but, no promises made." Silverstar padded over the Iceheart, "I want you to keep a close eye on her, she may look aharmless, but mind out anyway, take her out hunting, take somecat with you as well." then she padded to the fresh kill pile and sat with the elders to eat it.
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Post by Silverstream on Jun 5, 2007 11:52:06 GMT -5
I can roleplay, please give me a chance or subject, it's a bit hard without a storyline to follow give a chance as deputy or anything please....
Silverstream lunged, her tail flicking angrily at her opponent, the grey tom looked as though he hadn't eaten for days. He aimed a bite at her shoulder, but, suprising him, she leapt onto the trunk of a tree, and spat down at him climbing onto a low branch. Waiting for him to turn, then his tail flicked in triumph as he padded away, Silverstream launched herself from the branch, a trick she had done many-a-time, landing heavily on his back, she nimbly twisted and sank her teeth into the scruff of his neck, a pained yowl emitted from his mouth as she grasped further than a mother scraping his neck bone, she let go and he hurtled away, she spat the blood out of her mouth and hissed, "Rogues!" then, running back to camp she thoguth about how similar he looked...
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