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Post by waz up!!!!!!!! on Jun 2, 2007 22:47:16 GMT -5
Furcadia Name:Willowstream IC Name:Willowstream Clan You Wish To Join:waterclan Rank Wanted:med. cat if open if not then med cat apprentice RP Example:
Willowstream shuddered, the cold wind struck on her wet stricken pelt. Her tawny fur soaked to the skin. She shook off the wet drops that skidded down her sides. She padded past the rough long slips of grass iand into her den. Herbs scattered in piles around her. Her body seemed to freeze in place. Though she was a good swimmer, the days were cold. Her whiskers seemed frozen. She flicked off the drips that slid off the long slick whiskers that drew out of her muzzle. Her pads ached as the rough rocky ground dragged against her paws. Her tawny fur was striped with long waves of wet dark brown.
(tell me if you want the example longer)
Description: A wise tawny cat, it seems all med cats turn out wiser being med. cats. She was a hyper kit then volenteered to be Med cat since she was hurt by a dog when an apprentice.
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Post by Spottedstar on Jun 2, 2007 23:20:51 GMT -5
I think, as a major sucessor of leaders for the clans, I'd say no to being a medicine cat. Your rping is kind of repeatitive, meaning you start alot of your sentences with 'she' and 'her'. Though, I do see alot of room for improvement and you seem the type eager to learn so would you mind being placed as warrior/queen until your leader returns?
Also, by 'description' it means the outter appearance of your character. <3
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Post by waz up!!!!!!!! on Jun 2, 2007 23:42:00 GMT -5
I can do better if you want me to. I go on alot of other dream forums and they dont care how you put the rp example. I wasnt sure if it had to be excellent or blah its just an example. Ill do the rpg part over again. Unless you really think the Warrior position is the part open to me.
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Post by Spottedstar on Jun 3, 2007 10:43:51 GMT -5
I, being used to major, literate wolfspeak rping, don't really remember how people rp cats but I do remember a certain group I was in that had awesome grammar skills and were always top-notch with making posts understandable though not repeatitive. I think, as I already said, until the leader finds us again we will leave the higher ranks open for them to chose. :3 Also, this dream is based from rp. Exactly why there is no OOC area and why there will be strict rules of brackets when we get going again. I don't care what other forums do, rping is like a second life to me and if posts are not enjoyable to read then there's something wrong[/center]
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Post by waz up!!!!!!!! on Jun 3, 2007 13:11:45 GMT -5
actually yeah id take Warrior i think i more familair im only on maybe 2 forums where im actually a med cat or a med cat apprentice so yeah Warrior for me^^.
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